My brother

by TAKEN BY THE BEST   Oct 22, 2006


I have a brother
not much older
he was just a baby
who in listed in the navy
tears poor from mamma's eyes
as she watched him say goodbye
mommy's baby boy
was being deployed
now he is over seas
fighting for you and me
he doesn't know a lot of you
but that's just what he wanted to do
he loved his home
even if it's not as big as a dome
he'll come home one day
or at least that's what i pray
he's got a little girl
who sends me a lock of her curl
to send to her daddy
who will be so happy
to know that his baby
loves her daddy
but remember he's mamma's boy
being deployed

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  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Really cool poem I hope you send ur brother a copy of this. I know he'll love it . Thats all that keeps you
    going when ur in a combat zone is
    ur mail. so just keep writting everyday
    and spray ur letters with perfume.It
    makes his buddies jealous. lol.
    and thanks to you and your family
    my family and i are very thankful

    cy

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Really cool poem I hope you send ur brother a copy of this. I know he'll love it . Thats all that keeps you
    going when ur in a combat zone is
    ur mail. so just keep writting everyday
    and spray ur letters with perfume.It
    makes his buddies jealous. lol.
    and thanks to you and your family
    my family and i are very thankful

    cy

  • 18 years ago

    by Ericka

    I am honored to know your brother is fighting for me and every one else, when you send him a letter tell him THANK YOU!!!! Truely my family and I are PROUD of him and his courage. Wish you and your family the best!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ericka

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    I am honored to know your brother is fighting for me and every one else, when you send him a letter tell him THANK YOU!!!! Truely my family and I are PROUD of him and his courage. Wish you and your family the best!

  • 18 years ago

    by monika

    Excellent poem really touches your heart keept it up

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