Silent Cry

by Andi   Oct 22, 2006


No one understood her,
they never saw the fall,
she took the day he left her,
once and for all.

the days they dragged on slowly,
she bravely hid the tears,
so that no one would see,
how hurt she really was.

she found ways to help the pain,
like cutting open veins,
watching the red blood flow,
down her pale flesh.

she also thought of suicide,
as her only way out,
she didn't want her friends to hurt,
but she was hurt as well.

the days started moving faster,
but the nights alone were tough,
she tried to hold her feelings in,
though unsuccessfully at first.

*not true*

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  • 18 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    You are very good I really like your poems keep it up 5/5 please check out my poems it means a lot Thank You
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  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    IT`S G00D! BLAH T0 THAT C0MMENT! WH0 CARES? Y0U JUST WANNA LET PE0PLE KN0W THAT Y0U D0N`T REALLY FEEL LiKE THiS BUT CAN STiLL WRiTE A W0NDERFUL P0EM! GREAT J0B!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rain

    Hmm to keep the element of truth or fiction in there would have been good rather then comming out at the end and saying that it was not true. the element of doubt is a powerfull emotion. but keep writing