Hmm to keep the element of truth or fiction in there would have been good rather then comming out at the end and saying that it was not true. the element of doubt is a powerfull emotion. but keep writing

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You are very good I really like your poems keep it up 5/5 please check out my poems it means a lot Thank You
Burning~Wings