1,2,3,4

by Rain   Oct 22, 2006


1,2,3,4 cut again cut once more

5,6,7,8, turn the blood into hate

9,10,11,12 see the pain see the
scars

13,14,15,16 drowning deep in my heart

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Actually pretty good. I agree with tiffany- nice flow. =)
    Comment back if you want. ~_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffany

    I reckon it's really simple, which makes it so smart, and it flows really well.

    Well done.