Comments : Pop-Ups.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    "As they appear and
    built on your screen."

    I didn't exactly understand that line, and what you meant by built. But I did love the ending to this, it's something I think everyone can relate to at one point or another which always helps.

  • 18 years ago

    by bubbles

    Cute

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Lol i really enjoyed this poem, and i think that most of us out ther can agree that pop-ups are like one of the most annoying things lol. i loved that you used ryhimg to help your poem flow. it had a childish humor, and light headed fun, which really kept me reading. great write. 5/5..
    Please could you read and comment on some of my poems, i would love to hear from you. Thanks...Kirsty