Comments : Unwind

  • 18 years ago

    by Vonnie McHugh

    So sweet

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelly Buckendahl

    This poem is great.I never knew a guy could write this good. The feelings you put in to this is all true. Keep writing like this and you could have a book out.

  • 18 years ago

    by catherine

    It was very nice. If you want tips, stick to the same length of verse. I liked the rhyming though.