by JaneGirl28 Oct 22, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I wish to forget you. |
by RaNdOmRoB
JaneGirl28 ur very gifted and i think its a very deep poem u wrote. thx for leaving a comment on mine |
Wishes don't come true if our hearts refuse it. |
by Chelsey
I like it! One suggestion though...You should take this out of paragraoh format because it tends to turn readers off....other than that..it was good...you remind me of myself actually, these feelings you write here, are mainly what I wrote about on my first poem ever...I enjoyed it.. |