I like it! One suggestion though...You should take this out of paragraoh format because it tends to turn readers off....other than that..it was good...you remind me of myself actually, these feelings you write here, are mainly what I wrote about on my first poem ever...I enjoyed it..

Wishes don't come true if our hearts refuse it.

JaneGirl28 ur very gifted and i think its a very deep poem u wrote. thx for leaving a comment on mine