Eternal Love

by BeautifulxMess   Oct 22, 2006


Endless beating;
How time goes by fast.
Your touch, an ecstasy;
I forget my horrible past.

Deep breathing;
You keep me on my toes.
Your kiss is my drug,
addicted; It always shows.

Fragile eyes;
I see the love you hold.
Keep me under your wing;
I fly with your heart of gold.

Eternal hearts;
They never skip a beat.
The ultimate sacrifice;
Keeping you here with me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rose Noble

    I love it! I would deffinately rate this 5/5. I barely ever give those out. Usually 4.5 or something.
    B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I dont understand why they rate this poem only 3.8 coz i can see its really great! theres a unique style and i love the way u used the words it expressed well. great job and i will give 5/5

    god bless

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