It's all you

by Blackthistle   Oct 22, 2006


My heart bleeds with a thousand knives,
The things I gotta say,
The things I gotta hide.
If I tell him will he even listen?
If I tell him will he even understand?
He doesn't even know
He doesn't even care
He doesn't know I love him
He doesn't know I care
We talk all the time
And I can never tell him
He was all I had
Now I don't even have him
I'm broken
I'm down
My heart is being pierced and he doesn't know it's him
He doesn't know he's killing me
He doesn't understand...
I still love him but he doesn't know...

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Sorry...

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  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    I don't know why this was rated so low...

    It was really good, except for the flow. Some lines were too long, and some too short to go with the others. The emotion was great though. It reminded me of...me. Lol. I like a guy, he said he 'loved' me back, and it never ended up working out. -sigh- Ah well...The poem was still great. =D 4/5 xoxo

    Samantha