I don't know why this was rated so low...

It was really good, except for the flow. Some lines were too long, and some too short to go with the others. The emotion was great though. It reminded me of...me. Lol. I like a guy, he said he 'loved' me back, and it never ended up working out. -sigh- Ah well...The poem was still great. =D 4/5 xoxo

Samantha