I liked it, I can relate to it, but the swearing in the middle ruined it for me. It was an emotional poem though, and you can see all your views.

Wow...a very sad and upsetting poem about love. One of my favorite quotes is "Getting your heart broken is an unwritten rule of love" and I guess in this case it's true. I have never ever loved someone with all my heart, I have crushes on guys, sure. But no "in love" type of thing yet. Sorry this happen to you, no one deserves it. Though this was an excellent poem and you are a fantastic writer! 5/5 Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more of you poems in the near future.

Innoc3ntStar

This poem reflects very well in free prose the agony of rejection, or lost love [broken heart] It brings back many memories of my broken heart
never too old to get your heart broken
it will soon heal and you will cautiously try to love again

Sorry about my rambling the poem moved me that much
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I HATE HIM FOR DOING THIS. I LOVED IT. IT SHOWED ALOT OF EMOTION AND HATE TOWARDS HIM.

I LOVE YOU SIS!
ASHLA