No You shouldn't give into temptation, it will make You feel worse ;]

A very sad poem, I'm sorry You're feeling upset Hun *hugs* xx

Wow, Tammie!! This was really good!! ..I'm sorry that you had a bad night. I guess we all do from time to time.

But you should feel proud about this poem. The emotions you've got in this, are just really raw, and intense. I could definately relate, too!

Keep it up. 5/5

Natalie``

Xcellent poem, and what make it excellent is the true emotions that are share. I can relate, and totally have felt some these words before...XP

Can relate. And don't worry when I am in a bad state I just feel like a train wreck and writing furiously is the only way I can get it out! :) Loved it! Keep writing! 5/5

Innoc3ntStar

Awh, sweetie.. I hope your okay now. This wasn't your best poem but it did express what you were going through.. You did have some good descriptions and emotions in there, I just felt the flow didn't work well.. And that kind of pulled it apart. Also, some of your lines did not make sense in context to the stanza.. Nice job though hunny, 4/5.

Wow, tammie, this was really good! I love the title, and the poem as well! Thank you for the comment by the way, it was really helpful.

Excellent poem, it rocks my socks!

Love ~Angel of Secrets~

Good poem. The title draws you in. It was amazing, and it flowed really well even without a rhyme scheme. I like that. This line: That made sense and I liked--- didn't make sense to me though. The ending "and I liked" . Other than that- Outstanding!

xxEvilAngelxx

Aww its not bad. When I read this I was thinking of the phrase I heard... "I write my feelings through this pen. Understand the meaning of my world within." Maybe you can find yourself using it some time.

Awesome Job!
5/5

Im srry u had a bad nite. bu8t the poem was ok. not ur best but def not ur worst at all. keeo carrying on. some ppl do care. thx for ur continued comments,
love ya lots,
sore

Good job, you've got some nice metaphors in this poem. You can still work on the flow. Keep it up

I loved the title of this. It really brought me in and made me want to read the poem. I also loved the last two lines of the first stanza. I could definitely relate to that alot. && My most favorite part was the last two stanzas because I can relate to that so much right now. You did an amazing job on this poem! 5/5 Keep it up!

It wasn't that bad at all. I quite enjoyed reading it. A lot of emotion was put into it but yet a sad poem.

Good work.

The topic of the poem isn't very original, but you proved to make an original poem, good work. Even though you say it was one of the worst poems you have written, I say it's great. Although the unoriginal topic takes away from the poem a bit, almost everyone has written a poem about it once or twice, so still it's a good poem. Keep up the good work.