This is a really good poem..
good job!

just one thing i thought i should point out is in the line

"Nightmares doesn't touch me anymore" it might help the flow a bit more by changing 'doesn't' to 'don't'.

but overall i loved it well done!!

sophie:)

Well penned you potray here, so deeply emotions..."Time stands still for the brief moment of beauty, If it is missed then it is taken for granted... Hush for a second, feel the warmth escape the sky A cool, bright sunset warms with the breeze of life...

wish all the best for you, be safe.

This was really deep hun very touching n sad. xx

This is different from the last poem of yours i read, as usual ur ideas are fab and ur use of words excellent, keep it up and i look forward to reading more xox sam

So beautiful is the poet's words when put into verse. Extraordinary. This poem should get no less, nor should it derserve less, than 5/5.

Kind Regards,
Luna

Beautifull *5/5*..keep up the good work...luv it

Nice poem! I like the first stanza best, keep it up!
5/5

Again awesome write. always love ur work.....
waise y hav u started sad poems again. and no love poems? r u alrite dear? b happy yaar. i love ur romantic poems as well.

"WoW"
OMG! do I have to say More??!!
this is just..perfect...Beautiful penned huni!
I love the last line..this poem is absolutely awesome!
very well written & wonderfully expressed!

Keep it up
Best Of Luck
NemO x0x0x0x0x

This dreamland has no end
As i don't want to open my eyes
Nightmares don't touch me anymore
Since my senses have turned to ice.
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^^ I loved that stanza. This was amazing. I loved the concept....

sorry i havent been commenting your work lately. i'll get to it asap!! Keep writing!! take care!

-Poetess

Brilliant opening!
It just draws the reader in and compels them to read more.
As always your flow and concept has no faults.
Amazing!
5/5
*Gem*

(And of course i love my chair, we've been together 3 years ;)

Oh this was so very sad. Your writing always touches my heart.

Speeding away early morning
Looking for something called love
Singing songs for my own ears
Watching angels falling from above

I would have loved to hear the songs you were singing :)

Take care my dear friend.
Love Cindy