by Sarahs death angel Oct 23, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Raindrops fall softly |
by x.Athame.x
Very nice. I think, personally, that you could stand to improve the flow of the poem. The cadence is a little off and takes away from the read. Other than that it is great, the concept and wording is nice, its just the form that threw me off a little. I did particularly like these lines, |
by Ney ney
I love this one!!!! |