I love this one!!!!

Very nice. I think, personally, that you could stand to improve the flow of the poem. The cadence is a little off and takes away from the read. Other than that it is great, the concept and wording is nice, its just the form that threw me off a little. I did particularly like these lines,

"I'm blinded my soft falling tears
But still stare into the distance
And wait for my prince charming
On his shiny white steed"

A powerful piece, may many more flow from your pen, and your talent never fade. Best wishes, and blessed be. *5/5