Comments : My raindrops

  • 18 years ago

    by Ney ney

    I love this one!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Very nice. I think, personally, that you could stand to improve the flow of the poem. The cadence is a little off and takes away from the read. Other than that it is great, the concept and wording is nice, its just the form that threw me off a little. I did particularly like these lines,

    "I'm blinded my soft falling tears
    But still stare into the distance
    And wait for my prince charming
    On his shiny white steed"

    A powerful piece, may many more flow from your pen, and your talent never fade. Best wishes, and blessed be. *5/5