by Kevin Fitz Oct 23, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
The Inhumane Function of my Human Condition |
by Elynnka
Wonderful! Great rhymes and imagery! You have a spelling mistake in the last stanza - you wrote "it's" instead of "its" but you can edit that :) Except for that slight error, which I'm sure is caused by not paying attention, everything was purrrfect :) |
You own my friend. |