Bravo!!!!!!!! Excellent poem. This is one of the best poems that I have read of yours. Actually I think I like this one better then all the rest. I could actually picture each stanza as a scene from a play. I really wish that this one was longer lol. 5/5 Your amazing. Keep up the excellent writing.

Letty

Outstanding!!! I loved it. The flow was great as well as the structure and of course the rhymes where good as well. I really wish this one was longer, it pulled me in and I was just getting into it when it stoped. GreatJob overall.

Peace, Joe