A Phone Call Away {Cinquain}

by Natalie   Oct 23, 2006


................Missed you,
.............More than ever,
......But kept my fair distance,
Cause you were only a phone call,
.....................Away.

23rd October 2006
Copyright (C) Natalie

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A Cinquain is a short, unrhymed poem that
consists of 22 syllables distributed into 2, 4,
6, 8, 2 lines.
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  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Excellent write...

    "Cause you were only a phone call,
    Away."

    loved the ending... I havnt tried this form of poetry... bt still this one is simply beautiful...

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Well done Nat, there was such an emotional drive to this poem. In sounded very subtle to me, but it could also be because I read it that way! Lol, excellent job sis!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Awww.. Thats a nice one. In such a short poem you wrote alot. Nice job. =]

    Tammie xo

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Nice poem i like how you write you poems in different ways, that's cool. keep it upi shanik

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