Nice poem i like how you write you poems in different ways, that's cool. keep it upi shanik

Awww.. Thats a nice one. In such a short poem you wrote alot. Nice job. =]

Tammie xo

Well done Nat, there was such an emotional drive to this poem. In sounded very subtle to me, but it could also be because I read it that way! Lol, excellent job sis!

Excellent write...

"Cause you were only a phone call,
Away."

loved the ending... I havnt tried this form of poetry... bt still this one is simply beautiful...