I liked this it was really sad tho :(:( some of the rhyming seemedforced but alot of it was really wellexpressed the different size stanza gave it perfect flow xxx alex xxx

Aww hunny. I'm so sorry if this has happened. =( It's terrible, and it comes so suddenly. If you ever need someone to talk to, I'll be here. Feel free to PM me. =)

The poem...It has terrific flow, energy and emotion. I just felt as if I was drawn into it. Like I couldn't get out of the trance. You're a great writer. =) 5/5 xxoo

Samantha