The descending

by Keath   Oct 23, 2006


You destroy life with your own destruction
Slowly it is coming down
All your fears have gone in whisper
Nothing left but a satisfied frown

You live in your own imagined dungeon
For breaking free, it's too late
All love has left your vacant heart
Cursing your miserable fate

You don't see your fatal creation
Too late things become clear
By then, you have gone in madness
You have become your own fear

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  • 17 years ago

    by Corinne

    Well done Keath. I especially like that last line.

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very deep, I loved it. The emotion in this poem pulled me right in. Amazing job!!!

    Peace, Joe

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Wow. I don't know why no one else voted on this poem but it was amazing!
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    I've enjoyed reading your poems.
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    God Bless 5/5

    ~*Tay*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    This was very deep and it pulled me in. Now this is type of work I expect from you sense your so brilliant. The flow of this poem was excellent, the meaning was picture perfect. Keep up the great work. 5/5

    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Great poem it has such deepness in it. i love that. great poem keep it up. shanik

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