Awww... this is such a sweet poem. I loved all of it. You can tell that you really truly care about this person, it really shows through this poem. And I can definitely relate this to a certain time in my life as I'm sure many others can also. Great job on this! Keep it up! 5/5

[we grow more closer than before.]
You don't need "more" in there.

This one was good. The rhymes were different and not as commonly used as the ones in the other two poems. The flow was good and I liked the ideas you put into this. Nicely done 5/5