by Sweet lig Oct 23, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
I wanna run away from this place |
by Nix
This poem is deferent of your others. Second stanza is my favorite. You described emotions superbly. Flow is excellent. 5/5 |
by Cella Bella
In the second to last stanza it should be "sign" not "signs", I think. This although there wasn't a rhyme scheme, it was beautiful. Amaing flow! 5/5 |
Beautifully written and very positive in the end. I'm not a believer, but I understand the emotions that you portrayed in this piece. |
I wanna run somewhere space |
by Jenni Marie
I liked this one, particularly the meaning behind it. |