Aww! This is a very sad poem. I see that you also put a lot of deep feeling and strong emtions into this one. Keep up the lovely work hun! 5/5

Letty

Great poem. Again its very emotianal. I really enojoyed reading it. You should of put it on earlier. Its quite sad. Keep them up! Youve got talent! Thanks for your comment! xx

I thought personally this is an amazing poem && a great way of expressing your feeling of being confused of what direction you should take && what is wrong from right you know. very creative. I enjoyed this alot.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always && forever. also thanks for the comments means alot to me. =]

Wow this poem is really good, i really like the style and emphasis on the begginngs of lines repitition..it makes it very powerful

This is something that touches everyone-we've all felt lost at one point in our lives.You've expressed this very well.I've found that if I always follow my heart it never leads me wrong.Have faith in youself.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechkaa

I like it but I think you might need to revise it a little.
"There's no one could tell me
There's no one could help me"

I would change it to
There's no one WHO could tell me
There's no one WHO could help me

You just left out a word of those phrases.

I like the emotion you have put into, but i dont htink it is your best. I'm kinda in a hurry now or I would have commented your better poems, but i saw an error in this one and decided I would try to help.
But no its not bad. Its just not your best. Which is perfectly understandable. I have my bad ones posted as well. Its good to see a varietyr of work so that it gives the readers a point of view of where you are coming from. I have noticed while reading allot of the poetry, that all of the ones written by a particular author have their own writing style, or everything connects in a strange way. I realized this the most when I took on a contest. The objective was to combine my best lines of all my poems into one poem. I wasnt the only one. And I went to lok at all the poems of the entree's and saw the patters. It is understandable how that task isn't as difficult as it would seem because of the simularities of all their poems. Mine of coarse didn't turn out soo great but I had many compliments saying it was their favorite which of coarse I didnt understand but hey they all seemed to fit together well.
Another thing I like about your poetry is your referral to God. I am also a christian, and I write many pieces about him. But I have only posted one I can think of. It is "a reason" But it isnt my best either, it is horrible infact but I love my ending so i posted it because I think I make a good point. And I needed to let people know my religious points of view.
When people use God in their poetry it just makes it so much more inspiring.
Oh by the way thank you very much for commenting on my poetry. It means allot.
God bless you...
sincerely yours
~skittles

Sorry it was sooo long!!!(i get carried away about nothing

I liked this one, particularly the meaning behind it.
Again though, some of the grammar mistakes threw me off.
Keep working on that and it will hold much more power for the reader.

I wanna run somewhere space
[[...somehere {in} space...]]
A signs can guide me
A signs that i can follow
[[This is redundant. "A" means one thing and you have "signs" as pluaral, which means more than one. Take out "a" or the "s" in "signs".]]

But, I liked it. The ending was very suffice for the type of poem. I almost told you to put it in sad, until I got to the end.
Not too bad at all.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

Beautifully written and very positive in the end. I'm not a believer, but I understand the emotions that you portrayed in this piece.
Keep up!

In the second to last stanza it should be "sign" not "signs", I think. This although there wasn't a rhyme scheme, it was beautiful. Amaing flow! 5/5

marcella

This poem is deferent of your others. Second stanza is my favorite. You described emotions superbly. Flow is excellent. 5/5