The hurt i once felt

by janelle   Oct 23, 2006


Hurt by all the lies and deception
torn between the pain and love
used like a lost piece of yesterdays news
alone,broken and crying is how you left me
anger and hatred is what fills my twisted thoughts
hate is all i feel towards you
emptyness is all i find for you wripped apart my world
my broken heart will heal
in time you will fade
i wont see your face everytime i close my eyes
i wont hear you call my name
i wont even remeber how you touched me
ill forget you like you forgot me
the momories will remain
but the pain and thoughts of you will disappear
NO more tears will i shed for you
No more wishing you would walk through the door
i will re-build my world once again
make it stronger
and never again will you brake it
yes, you've hurt me
but you've also made me stronger
so this is my goodbye
i wish you luck for you'll never find
anyone who loved you like i did

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  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Though one of my poems is non rhyming, it's not my fav kind of poetry though i'm learning to like it. the emotion in this is definitely understandable. My suggestion is to watch your spelling and grammar. We all fall short in that area, but for instance use ANGER instead of angry in your 5th line and memories instead of momories. It will help keep the reader focused on your message not your spelling! Hope that helps, and thanks for the very sweet comment!
    Jpoet*

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