Though one of my poems is non rhyming, it's not my fav kind of poetry though i'm learning to like it. the emotion in this is definitely understandable. My suggestion is to watch your spelling and grammar. We all fall short in that area, but for instance use ANGER instead of angry in your 5th line and memories instead of momories. It will help keep the reader focused on your message not your spelling! Hope that helps, and thanks for the very sweet comment!
Jpoet*