Stars

I understand the sentiments that went into the writing of the poem, but I think it could perhaps do with a little more work, a bit more polish. It has potential, maybe just clean up the spelling and your word arrangement to make it easier to understand, Poetry is one of the simplest and most effective ways for us to express our uniqueness. I hope you keep it up, because there is the spark of something cool there.

Let the Force hang loose,
Matt