I really like this poem. I'm not sure exactly what you were tryin' to put out by it, as it seems a very subtle meaning with very abstract words. But telling by the end, to me personally, it seemed as if you were speaking aloud your thoughts to a higher being, or atleast a being of which you think you belong to. God? Well, not throught he beginning I wouldn't quite say that.But... I don't know. I think I have to read that again. Anyway,the only problem I found in it was that you need to get rid of the e on the end of 'breathe':

From a single breathe...

otherwise it's breathing, rather than singular breath. Again, you showed your strengths in repitition, Good :)