I absolutley loved the style and flow.
Very deep emotions formed into a beautifully penned piece. It was truly a lovely write.

Very Good. Great rhythm....

That was beautiful. I absolutely loved it! Your a beautiful writer. 5/5

Beautifully written. Once again, you have outdone yourself. I love your writing!

The name that your heart beats to meet is
the lover you seek to make you complete.

This was my first thought reading your poem,
then while reading it again I got to thinking this
also could be the faint heartbeat of a baby that
woman physically and emotionally long for.
Either way I see it you have penned a beautiful
poem. Excellent job well done and Write On,
Bogie

Melissa, if I only had the words to say how indescribably wonderful I think this poem is. Written from heart, perfected by soul...

Deep and emotional write. Feelings that I relate to so well. Sad yet so beautifully written. Well done as always....

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

The poem made me think. it has a deep meaning. i like how u word it. the poem flows well. gr8 job:)

Wow, that is truly an amazing poem. Such emotional writing and wording. Great job.

If possible could you check out my poem.