Good job!! nice poem its so easy to fall for someone well nice job keep it up:)

Another great write. well done,

i especially loved the lines

" But my heart became the boss
And it's not liking demotion" the way u wrote it just made it so effective.

wonderful write.

sophie:)

In my opinion, it didn't stick out from any other love poem, but to be honest, love poems are always hard to write, well, I think anyway. Sorry that I couldn't be more positive.

Brad