Great job!
This was a very good poem!
5/5!

This is pretty unique from what i hv read so far & i liked it

all the best and take care

It's a bit unique. Not really one of my faves but it had this distinct style to it. Something about it drew my attention though. I did like the repetition of "today" it added something to it. Not the best but nicely done.
~Faith-less