It's so hard loving some one when you know they love someone else. Great work 5/5

Wow. this is my new favorite poem. this is the best poem i have read in a while. iim sorry that your sad, but hey it made a good poem. still sorry you feel that way. there are other fishies in the sea. :) 5/5

Very good poem, well penned, organized and it expresses your feelings. 5/5 and keep up the good work.

Ok wow i cant believe your thinking of not writing ne more this is AMAZING i had to read it twice it was so good im going to read some more but if they're ne thing like this they will be GREAT!!!

Awww that was sad but ut was really kool how u wrote it! i say keep writin coz your realli gud at it.

LOVED the ending. It's so frustrating to NOT be the person they want and never understand what you lacked. Good job in expressing your feelings!
*ME*