88 pieces

by masked_senses   Oct 23, 2006


I need to talk to you...
i am but nothing...
a nobody who can be...
be mistaken...
forgot me alone...
forgot how to think...
and learn how to speak...
my useless tongue...
has let you down...
i write this down...
asking for forgiveness...
from my self...
do not let me lose you...
do not let me fade...
your anger has broke me...
into 88 pieces...
maybe more...
please feel me...
feel my confession...
the confession of a fool...
with a mouth...
he dont know how to use...
a man with a hope...
a hope for night...
a night forgotten...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    Interesting poem.
    It was told in a structure that added a lot of overall effect to the final piece and as always the words you use play a huge part as they manage to draw the reader in and almost show them whats going on.
    Well done! Fab poem
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Good Poem!..
    5/5
    Oh nd thanx alote 4 spending so much time reveiwing my poems!
    =-)

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