Good Poem!..
5/5
Oh nd thanx alote 4 spending so much time reveiwing my poems!
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Interesting poem.
It was told in a structure that added a lot of overall effect to the final piece and as always the words you use play a huge part as they manage to draw the reader in and almost show them whats going on.
Well done! Fab poem
5/5
*Gem*