Aww hun thats so cute good job

Wow!!! Indredible! Even though there is no rhyme scheme or syllable count it flows so well! I didn't have to pause and change the rhythm I was reading at! On spelling mistake though: "That so gentley grasps mine" should have GENTLY... Other than that, Great work!!

xxEvilAngelxx

Awwww I like this poem is so sweet....I like it a lot, I can relate to this poem it pretty much help me brighten up my day...thank you for sharing your talent with us...5/5 Keep up the good work

Wow, another amazing poem,
too great.
and you know what with this vote of me right now you are completing 500 votes on your poems, great job. you deserve 5000 votes.
keep up the great work so i can always read them. you are awsome.

and i was wondering if you have MSN, you can just pvt message it to me.so we could talk about our poetry.lol.

take care and keep the great work. another 5/5 from me.