by Chelsey Oct 23, 2006
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
YIELD, slow down buddy |
by jarrod
Just as you said, you write about "sin" as well. Ironically, you write about topics that I write about. Though your style is different then mine, not that you can call mine a style lol, it shows the same points needing to be said from time to time. Clairvoyance In Life! Good work! --jarrod. |
Another great poem. I liked how you used the road signs. Goof job 5/5 |
by dora
0MG chels! that was soo good. omg that was really inspiring and i L0VE the way u structured it. ur so talented omg that was really smart! l0l great job and very touching =] keep em coming darl xx |
by Eibutsina
Chelsey you have clearly outdone yourself with this fantastic write baby sister. I am blown away princess, the way you have incorporated common traffic notations into a poem about your blessed faith is near masterpiece. I always adore reading your religious fuelled poetry, I admire the strength of your faith and how you so effortlessly communicate that to people who are lucky enough to read your poetry. You just keep getting better and better bubba titta, you make me so proud. I love you and I loved this poem!! |
by Laura
Chels this was so super creative! I absolutely LOVED it! How original an idea however you thought this one up was great. It was different but definately a good read, I also liked how there was 2 meanings to thepoem...one was traffic signs and one was faith and you mixed them together beautifully. I also noticed your original rhyming words...NICE! |