Comments : HeartBeat

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    2nd stanza was my fav i liked the poem alot. nice title too. i get it now! jk, im not that blonde. love the plot,
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    Hmm when I read this I can't help but think of my own writing style..I don't know why. if it reminds me of my own, then it means I like it ;) haha.

    Good job on this. just...become 'not-one' with the knife. kay? kay :)