You just got to love these cowards who vote a 1 with no comment ...Geez

Even when gasoline
mixes with water
A rainbow appears.
On the squares of concrete
when it is poured
brings forth a magical sphere
^^^
Very descriptive creating clear imagery.

Thank you for sharing your words.
Take care, Luanne

I`m trying to figure something out! whats up with these low ratings on great writing? this is excellent,original idea, great rhymes,great content, clear message. great job!