Very true n full of hopes gr8 poem!!!

God bless u

:) me likey. :) It made me smile.

I liked this, I thought it flowed nicely, and I liked the meaning behind it.
The imagery, although short, was nice and the wording was a joy to read.

Another poem that sounds like a nursery rhyme, however, I think this one applies most to teenagers and adults. Simple, yet moving.

Short and strong really great work, it was really touching

Wow, you have gave out a great advise but as you know it is not that easy to ignore the pain.....lol...

great job once again, 5/5

Hey, ur poems r good i like them alot, there excellent ;)
Mary!

That was simple and straight to the point. good job! i like it a lot!

This sounded more like a quote then anything it was nice but real short and just made me think you were trying to cheer me up. Now why do I need cheered up?

Short, sweet, and to the point! Great job :D. I love reading happy poems once and a while, so this was a true pleasure. Hah, I feel happier now! Thanks!
Keep up the great work!

Hatori
The Illusionist

Hmmm... very true. In fact it was just today I told my friend the exact same thing!! (she was homesick). Its amazing how thinking of all the good things coming up makes your mood change. We're so lucky in life and yet we can loose sight of that so easily. :)