by Brokenxx [aka Alex] Oct 24, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Dedicated to just another of those stupid little girls |
Incredible poem. Started out strong and ended strong. A slightly original topic, and well written too. You have an awesome vocabulary... although a few spelling mistakes (phoney= phony, ill = i'll, im = i'm, and "our imperfections = that our imperfectinos") |