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by Jared McCaw Oct 24, 2006 category : Love, romance / desired love
Come travel with me my dear, we'll take a trek across the sea, a little underwater adventure all the creatures for us to discover. let's just take a little walk baby, we can walk the bottom of the water. the coral reef all around us, encased and wrapped within it's beauty. bring your pretty little face, and we can swim together forever, jelly fish could be our neighbors, in our underwater home. leave the miseries of people, as only a gateway to our life, simply a long forgotten memory, of things better left behind. would you ever care, if you never saw these monsters again? if it could be just you and i, on our adventure through the sea? i want to take you to see the marlins, the muscles, and the clams, i will make you a thousand necklaces, from the pearls within their mouths. and i want to kiss you in front of all, knowing no one will ever care. come with me pretty girl, and we can go forth into the sea. come travel with me my dear, we'll take a trek across the sea, a little underwater adventure all the creatures for us to discover.
by Chelsey
THis poem was a very creative write! I thought this was really unique since it went along with your story line "i will make you a thousand necklaces, from the pearls within their mouths" Beautiful poem...you let the readers imagine whatever they wanted and thats great writing! I loved it!