This random topic that you picked is an very common issue with teenagers and no one yet has ever written anything abt it or atleast i hvnt come across so far.....every one goes thro this stage...its just a matter of time and then there is one phrase in which i really believe |
by Jessica
Awh, wow, sophie! That was awesome, I loved it! It was so harsh but very well done.. I really enjoyed it, lol. It was very interesting, the flow worked well, and I just loved it! =P I think you should change the title though.. I think it lets the poem down a bit.. Try putting in something that will make the reader want to read it.. Like "Maskara Covered Eyes" or "The Hottest Guy In School" lol.. I don't know, your title is fine if you like it! =] Keep up the excellent work hunny! 5/5 |