Wonderful! I have a question though. Why don't you use punctuation? I liked the whole poem and its meaning. You did a excellent job. 5/5
Keep up the good work.

I loved his again! its so true! we're such UCKS. i cantthink of a real word. lol
one thing i dont like is-
Why do we not realize it
it? you can do better than that!!!
why do we not realize this ___
sheesh. lol
i also think the last line is alittle too long, you could get rid of only. and itd make it shorter so itd flow better.

x3 Lauren