Suicide The Only Way Out

by Jamie   Oct 24, 2006


I screwed up,
How Do I Escape,
Should I be like my dad?
and just give up.
Or should I try to go on,
and fix what I did.
Why Do That,
When I Can Easily,
Just Give Up On Everything
Take The Gun To My Head,
Tell Everything Goodbye,
and Pull The Trigger.
The blood splashes,
Against the Wall,
My mom walks in,
She sees what happened,
Wondering Why?
She Doesnt know,
What is going on in my life.
I should Just Give Up.
Put the gun to my head,
Pull the trigger,
And say Goodbye,
Forever,

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  • 17 years ago

    by HuggyQueenofCookies

    I'm telling you now that there isn't any satisfication on suicide..this is a once suicidal person speaking..and I just dealt wiht a friend committed suicide and no one understood.

  • 18 years ago

    by starcrossedlvr

    Wow this is a very graphic poem and tells everyone what really happens as the result of suicide...but i know alot of ppl probably told u that its not the way out and imma tell u the same it seems like it is just to give up just to put ur mind to rest i know...you just got to find sumthin to live for no matter how little or big that sumthin is...liked it keep it up and God Bless.

  • 18 years ago

    by jessica

    Dude i feel the sme way but thats life and we don't know what to do so hang in there

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Great peom. I hope this isn't from your own life, but great poem. Everything will be okay, just takes time.

    XOX Tiffany

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