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by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Oct 24, 2006


My dear love, never shall you understand,
Differences in the way i write and speak.
A complex rush of words flowing quickly to paper,
When i talk words seem so weak.

Life is bitter, so poems are crucial,
Explanations of the deeper inner soul.
The passion i feel when i write to you,
Makes myself become whole.

To love another, as you are loved,
Must be emotional, strong and bold.
My love for you, passionate, powerful to extreme,
Another heart full of stories told.

Words never needed, for i have a mind,
Written emotions come across so fine,
Hard, so free fresh therapy to the world,
Perfection appears gradually in time.

The kiss of an angel, so soft on a cheek,
Gives a whole new lease of life to me,
Holding me tight, i don't want this to end,
Our love is an ocean so pure so free.

THIS IS FOR MY BABY xx

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Very interesting poem. Although I must admit I think that I'm reading it wrong because the last stanza doesn't seem to fit well with the rest of the poem. I took it to mean that the person in this poem's boyfriend/girlfriend doesn't understand their passion for writing and then the rest of the poem is explaining to them why its such an important part of who the author is deep inside. But then the last stanza is all about how perfect the love between he girl and boy are. But how can that be if they don't understand something that is so important? I think that I would change the first line because the “Never shall you understand,” part is what is confusing the reader. But I think that once that is fixed it will be a lot clearer what the message is. Nice idea though.

  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    Beautiful poem. You right so well. I love reading your work.

    Josie

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelsea

    Extremely sweet. You worded it very well. The flow I'm not so sure about, its a bit rocky.
    But, good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great one:) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    WOW. I loved it!
    Everything about this was perfect, the wording, the flow.
    Loved it all.

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