Amazing.. I loved everything about this poem, the flow and rhythmn was excellent.. The wording was brilliant, and the message so true for many.. Well done, absolutely amazing :] 5/5 xx

Beautiful job, the last three stanza was my favorite.

I really liked this one. There were only a few problems that I could see and that was in the first stanza. You started the stanza with: My dear boy. to me that made the poem seem a bit childish in the beginning. I think it would have been better if you would have begun with: My dear love or anything but boy actually. lol . And also in the second stanza last line you wrote: Makes my person, myself become whole. Your person is you, so you could have left out myself and just wrote: Makes my person become whole. That would have been better, and the flow would have still been excellent. Other then that I see nothing else wrong with this poem and I think it was beautiful. 5/5

Letty

Oh, great poem. =D

this is probably the best of the four i have read. =D

tho the last line is a little cliche, its hard not to fall into that trap, and the rest of the poem is original and filled with emotion once again.

keep writing, u have such talent, yet so much potential for other gorgeous poems,
xxx

This poem is great i like it i havent been on for a long time so just put a bunch of new poems on come on and check them out anytime
thanks for the comment i was starting to think no one noticed (wouldnt of mattered)

WOW. I loved it!
Everything about this was perfect, the wording, the flow.
Loved it all.

Great one:) 5/5

Extremely sweet. You worded it very well. The flow I'm not so sure about, its a bit rocky.
But, good job.

Beautiful poem. You right so well. I love reading your work.

Josie

Very interesting poem. Although I must admit I think that I'm reading it wrong because the last stanza doesn't seem to fit well with the rest of the poem. I took it to mean that the person in this poem's boyfriend/girlfriend doesn't understand their passion for writing and then the rest of the poem is explaining to them why its such an important part of who the author is deep inside. But then the last stanza is all about how perfect the love between he girl and boy are. But how can that be if they don't understand something that is so important? I think that I would change the first line because the “Never shall you understand,” part is what is confusing the reader. But I think that once that is fixed it will be a lot clearer what the message is. Nice idea though.