That is so sweet and really describes the love You have for your bf well.
The rhythmn was brilliant.. beautifully written as always 5/5

Good job. nice use of vocab. You may want to capitalize your I and add ' to I'd. Overall the poem had good content, but the flow could still be better. Keep it up

This was cute. But again there is that same problem with the flow, because of the forced rhyming. I liked the poem, but I don't believe it was your best. So I give you a 4/5 for the effort. I really didn't feel any type of feeling or emotion in this poem. It didn't even pull me in. But I know sometimes that we all just write what first comes to mind, because I do it myself sometimes. But I know that you could have worked this poem out a whole lot better hun. Keep writing.

Letty

Good poem, tho not one of ur best, but still beatifully written as always. =)

ur love for ur bf is not only conveyed in ur words, but also the overall feel and emotion in the poem.

ok rhyme and flow.

keep writing,
xxx

This is another favourite of mine. It was so sweet and it made me smile.

This is nice. i like ur poems gurl! keep it up :)

Beautiful poem. Another 5/5

Beautiful poem...well penned...but certainly not your best..though this 1 has it's own beauty like the rest of your works!!!....Great write!5/5!