Oasis

by Arien   Oct 24, 2006


The sweet smell of water
The golden sand beneath me
The tall leafy green trees.

I wrote this during ELA-9 so comment me of what you think of my haiku.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Arien

    Ty naughty i will sometime when i have time.

  • 18 years ago

    by naughtyangelxxx

    You have a way with words ;)
    You have talent in expressing your thoughts, you'll have to do it with some of my poems...express thought, i mean ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by rainbowliciouz

    This is good keep up the good writing

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