Alex, I really enjoyed reading that it is heart felt excellent play with the wording.5/5

Drew

A very sweet poem and the message it tells is so very true.. Well done 5/5 xx

Very true, nicely put message. Wonderful job.

I liked this, i thought it was really sweet.

I love this poem its so true!! good work!!!
~Chelle!~

I do believe this is the best poem of yours that I have read. I didn't see anything wrong, but maybe a few grammer mistakes. But those were minor compared to the meaning and the love that you placed in this poem. This was excellent! 5/5
Keep up the wonderful work hun!

Letty

Wow. i love it. its so true. =D i hope this is based on ur current experiences. =D

excellently written, keep up the great work
xxx

Philosophical poem indeed...a message conveyed is what i read...! yes indeed, love is beautiful...

Wonderful poem. I like it. I like it a lot. =) If I could write a poem like that(True, good), I would love my own poetry. Keep it up.

Wonderfully penned poem here. Written nicely. The message was portrayed great behind. a good effort on this sweet love poem~mel

Wonderfully penned poem here. Written nicely. The message was portrayed great behind. a good effort on this sweet love poem~mel

Very cute and original! I found myself smiling when I reached the end it was a very cute poem! I enjoyed reading it very much!

Good poem but it could be better. Still a 5/5

That was nicely paneed and well written. take care 5/5